When I think of a particular form of the poem, I directly thought of Shakespeare Sonnets. I chose the one that I studied before, Sonnet 20, as my template. However, I realized the format of Sonnet does not have a rule that I can easily replace words. So, I borrowed a general format that Sonnet has and implement my own form.
The Sonnet I chose has total 11 sentences and every three sentences is categorized as one section. The last two sentences are its own section and indented.
So, I rewrote the poem by adding my own rule. Every section’s odd and even number sentences are in the same sentence structures. As you can see from the image in below:
So, I picked most of my vocabularies from Corpora and some I just manually typed it myself. Later, I installed base_english so I can implement capitalization and third person verb form. But, I realized that base_english does not include the different verb tense such as V+ing so I can only add “ing” manually; therefore, the grammar is a little off.
After looking back to my poem, I found that is really different than what I initially thought..The meaning has totally changed and it does not make much sense. Also, within each section, those sentences seem not associate or coherent to each other…which I realize how challenging it is to redesign a sonnet and implement my own style in it. In order to make it perfect, I believe there must be multiple trials and to reconsider the word choices.
So this week, I decide to use a well known Taiwanese recipe as my first data source. While working on this assignment, the challenge I had was to figure out how to replace those specific words to my new words. I realize I have to go back to the text file to reorder the lines so that those words that I want to replace are placed on even lines.
Another challenge I found out was the awkward spacings after seeing the result. So, I seek out for help and realize that I can go all the way back to the first line and use line.strip(‘\n’) instead of line so that those additional spacings will disappear.
The idea is that using a recipe template with the ingredients and after all randomly shuffle the order the meal comes out differently every time. This process is sort of mimicking the process of cooking, which I found really interesting.
The text file of the recipe and find the original source here
three coup chicken recipe
Letter to my cellphone and response back from my cellphone…
The reason why I wrote a love poem to my cellphone is because of this is the stuff that be with me every day and every second. So, I pretend that my phone has a characteristic like a human that probably will have something to say to me. So, I wrote the letter to my cellphone first and I created another poem as a response back from my cellphone back to me. The response letter took me awhile to come up with the words since I’m in the perspective of a “machine,” which it might not function as human. Therefore, I predicted what my cellphone would have a say to me. It was an interesting thoughts because I never thought I would treat my cellphone like a “person.”
I realized that every time when I generated the codes, some lines seem unrelated but somehow works. I think this is the beauty of randomness.
#1: handwritten notes
The tides advance, the tides recedes. Winter goes and summer comes, summer wanes and the cold increase. The sun rises, the sun sets. The moon is full; the moon is black. The birds arrive, the birds depart. Flowers bloom; flowers fade. Seeds are sown; harvests are reaped. All nature in a circle of moods and I am apart of nature and so, like the tides, my moods will rise; my moods will fall.
It’s one of nature’s tricks, little understood, their each day and awaken with moods that have changed from yesterday. Yesterday’s joy will become today’s sadness; yesterday’s sadness will grow into tomorrow’s joy.
#2: handwritten notes
The problem of cell phone addition has increased an affected our life without notice. For example, people lose focus during business meeting, classes, and other events. These habits cause serious problems such as missing out the important details at the meeting and cannot concentrate their attention in the learning environment. The people who are mostly being affected are approximately between the age of 16 to 40. I think is important to face to this problem because of the addition that is causing problems of people’s daily life.
Nowadays, people are able to receive instant information by clicking keyboards or swiping their phone. We are living in the world that we are forced to receive new information every second; therefore, we are trained to be inpatient for anything. For example, we think a three minutes wait in the line for subway is too long. To wait for that three minutes would cause people being late at work.
The problem of being inpatient is affecting especially the group of millennials. These young adults are lack of patient at work and in a relationship. For example, these young adults expect quick returns or job promotions opportunities in their early career. Without making the major outcome, they start losing confidence and ambition. In addition, millennials have no patient to build a deep relationship with a person. They want to know about a person in a short period of time and may go on for the next one.
in the city, safety is always the concern that people specially care about. In NYC, we constantly have violence happened around us which cause the anxiety of being in the public space. My target group would be those people who are less risk conscious and should be more alert while in the public. It is important to notice your surrounded environment; therefore, we can react and fight back to the risk and protect ourselves.